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-title: Plume - A federated blogging engine
+title: Plume: A federated blogging engine
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 <header>
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         of many instances, servers with different specifications and policies, each one running a specific application,
         with different purposes, not always Plume.
         It means that for instance, Plume is able to communicate with microblogging apps
-        like <a href="https://joinmastodon.org">Mastodon</a>, <a href="https://misskey.xyz">Misskey</a>, or
+        like <a href="https://joinmastodon.org">Mastodon</a>, or
          <a href="https://pleroma.social/">Pleroma</a>.
-        Other blogging apps which support federation, such as <a href="https://writefreely.org">WriteFreely</a> can also
+        Even other blogging apps which support federation, such as <a href="https://writefreely.org">WriteFreely</a> can also
         communicate with Plume! It means that you can comment and like Plume articles
         from any of these other instances.
         </p>
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       <main>
         <h3>Great diversity</h3>
         <p>
-          Each instance is hosted and moderated by different peoples, resulting in different
-          rules, thematics and ambiance. An instance can suit you better than another, depending
-          on your opinions and interests.
+          Each instance is hosted and moderated by different peoples across varied locations of the world,
+          resulting in diverse rules, thematics and ambiance that it focuses on.
+          Thus one given instance can suit you better than another, depending on your opinions and interests.
         </p>
         <p>
-          And if no instance makes you feel like home, you can create your own, if you are a bit
+          And if no existing instance makes you feel at home, you can very well create your own, if you are a bit
           adventureous.
         </p>
         <a href="#instances">Find your dream instance</a>
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           it is resilient to economic problems. And because of its decentralized nature it is
           also harder to censor than traditional platforms.
         </p>
-        <p>And even if one instance goes down, the rest of the network continue to work normally.</p>
+        <p>And even if one instance happens to go down, the rest of the network will continue to work uninterrupted.</p>
       </main>
     </div>
 
@@ -109,13 +109,13 @@ title: Plume - A federated blogging engine
       <main>
         <h3>Open</h3>
         <p>
-          Plume is libre software, based on open standards, like
+          Plume is a libre software, based on open standards, like
           <a href="https://activitypub.rocks">ActivityPub</a>,
           which means you can help making it better.
         </p>
         <p>
           We are not only welcoming coders, but anyone who want to help: translators,
-          designers, people with communication skills, or anybody else that has someting
+          designers, people with communication skills, or anybody else who feels like they have someting
           to offer to the project!
         </p>
         <a href="https://contribute.joinplu.me">Discover how you can help</a>