Merge pull request #3 from marek-lach/patch-1

Update index.html.erb to correct some grammar and more clearly explain what Plume is.

source/index.html.erb

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
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-title: Plume
+title: Plume - A federated blogging engine
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 <header>
@@ -17,8 +17,8 @@ title: Plume
       <main>
         <h2>Write once, publish everywhere</h2>
         <p>
-          Plume is not a single website, but a network of what we call <em>instances</em>.
-          You write from your instance, but anyone on any Plume instance can enjoy your stories.
+       Plume is not a single website, but an entire interconnected, yet independent network of what we call <em>instances</em>.
+       You write content from your own instance, but anyone else on any other Plume instance can enjoy your stories too.
         </p>
       </main>
     </div>
@@ -28,8 +28,8 @@ title: Plume
       <main>
         <h2>Social blogging</h2>
         <p>
-          When we write it is, most of the time, to share something with other people.
-          Plume has many features that allow the exchange to be bi-directional.
+        When we write, it is, most of the time, to share something with other people.
+        Plume has many features that allow the exchange between writers and readers to be bi-directional from the get-go.
         </p>
       </main>
     </div>
@@ -40,8 +40,8 @@ title: Plume
         <h2>Collaborative writing</h2>
         <p>
           Plume also makes it easy to collaborate on an article. Since blogs are not
-          limited to one author, many people can write in the same blog, improve each other work,
-          to get the best final result.
+          limited to one author, many people can write in the same blog, improve each other's work,
+          to get to the best final result.
         </p>
       </main>
     </div>
@@ -60,14 +60,15 @@ title: Plume
       <main>
         <h3>Not just Plume</h3>
         <p>
-          Plume instances are part of a huge network, called the Fediverse. It is made
-          of many instances, each one running a specific application, not always Plume.
-          It means that for instance, Plume is able to communicate with microblogging apps
-          like <a href="https://joinmastodon.org">Mastodon</a> or
-          <a href="https://pleroma.social/">Pleroma</a>.
-          Other blogging apps, like <a href="https://write.as">Write.as</a> can also
-          communicate with Plume! It means that you can comment and like Plume articles
-          from any of these other instances.
+        Plume instances form one part of a huge network, collectively called the Fediverse. It is made up
+        of many instances, servers with different specifications and policies, each one running a specific application,
+        with different purposes, not always Plume.
+        It means that for instance, Plume is able to communicate with microblogging apps
+        like <a href="https://joinmastodon.org">Mastodon</a>, <a href="https://misskey.xyz">Misskey</a>, or
+         <a href="https://pleroma.social/">Pleroma</a>.
+        Other blogging apps which support federation, such as <a href="https://writefreely.org">WriteFreely</a> can also
+        communicate with Plume! It means that you can comment and like Plume articles
+        from any of these other instances.
         </p>
         <a href="">Learn more about the Fediverse</a>
       </main>